Hooked on Hooks Critique

Tinkering with that first sentence or the first paragraph of your WIP?

Here at The Good Hook, you can share either one and the readers of this blog can give you their thoughts on it!

Please send your first sentence or first paragraph to thegoodhook(at)yahoo(dot)com, and we will let you know the day your hook will be posted so you can let all of your followers know to stop by and critique your hook.